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Old 11-25-03, 02:08 PM   #16
Da_Legend
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yungs opener was weak
Be decietful, Leave this fool shot up and more 'Holier' than
a fuckin Cathedreal//
^^^ played concept, enuff wit da Holier shit man....its real wack now

Till your arteries get so FAT you'll be beggin ME for
slim~fast//


Like pussy this ~bitch~ bleeds commonly and needs a ~pad~to hold his flow~/
Freestyling? naw that’s called prewriting like a ~newspaper~ add ~2 bold to show~/
^^^ opener was better than yung's......not all dat....but above average



overall

flow = yung
structure = none(lolol dat rhymes)
punches = exec
creativity = both
metas = exec
wordplay = both

vote = exec

kinda cloes