View Single Post
Old 11-27-03, 02:39 AM   #8
Menik
Word.
 
Menik's Avatar
 
Posts: 2,017
From: Mifflinburg, PA
IP:

This was alright man.....the flow was pretty decent, try adding some more multies and internals to help that out though, it got off at a few spots so try adding that to it.....The structure was alright watch the line length though....overall this was alright keep at it and keep dropping.
Send a message via AIM to Menik Send a message via MSN to Menik   Reply With Quote