Flow - Didnt fall off at all, so thats good
Vocab - You added some really good vocab in there.
Multies - Didnt see to many, but its straight
Allusions - Pretty good with the allusions
Imagery - Very nice imagery, good part of this flow.
Rhyme Scheme - Simple, but it didnt fade the eddectivness
Topic - I felt you were expressing your mind, so thats a good thing. You didnt say the topic. But I understand what you wrote.
Rateing - 7.5-8.0 / 10

Very good drop hommie. Stay up, and keep elevatin.

OUT

-High Class a.k.a Confusion

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