If you want to start elevatin from any place possible. I would start with Vocab, rhyme scheme, and line length. You have rhyme, you aint got no problems in the area. But you gatta combine everything in one whole, to creat somthing people like. Good drop though hommie, i know you can elevate. So I will be checking your future flows. Keep it up hommie.

OUT

-High Class a.k.a Confusion

__________________