This was straight hommie. My suggestion, is to work on your rhyme scheme, vocab, and maby imagery a little bit more. Your good at it, dont get me wrong. But I think this would be alot better if you used those more elevated. It was a good drop hommie. I like reading personal topics, kinda lets you know who the rapper behind the computer is.Ya know hommie.Rate -7.5 /10

Do me a fav. and go check my flow " Complicated Man " It was a pretty quike write by me, But I think alot of people will like it on the site. Tell me what you think of it hommie, aight.


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