I respect you alot hommie. The rhyme scheme was simple, and I would say use more vocab. But I got a feeling thats nt your style. I hope you and your new family does good hommie, you got my blessings. I dont give a fuck what anyone say's, there aint nothen wrong with bing whipped by somone you love. IM whipped by my ladie, and I dont care. LOL. I liked this hommie, I can relate to this. Me and my girl almost had a Baby. It was a scare, but I realized how much she loved me and I loved her. Good drop hommie.

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-High Class a.k.a Confusion

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