A King Missing a Queen...
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Rob D- I liked your verse, simple flow, But a good choice on where to take this topic. Vocab was straight, didnt over do it. It had god imagery. I like emotion being put into flows, so that is another up. You could have used better description of what you where doing, rather than just the ladie and her surroundings, I liked this drop though hommie, good work... 6.5 - 7.0 / 10
Skiddz- I wasnt feeling where you took the topic. At certain points you kinda fell of the flow. You had a simple rhyme scheme, and I wasnt feeling the imagery very much. I know you can do better, this just wasnt your best. You could use more vocab, cause the length of your lines are on point. I just feel you need to fin out what to put in between that space. Keep the elevation hommie... 5 / 10
Vote - Rob D
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