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Old 12-01-03, 07:56 PM   #8
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A2Z - That was a nice verse, very good imagery. I pictured the whole thing through my mind. You had pretty good vocab, and your rhyme scheme didnt mess with the flow. I normal onr would, big up on that one. It was good on the topic, I felt how that person is feelings. Very nice hommie... 9 / 10

PhiL - You had a good verse to hommie. You lacked the imagery, and kinda a downfall on the vote. You had good flow, nice rhyme scheme. I was feeling how you took it, maybe could have been longer. But I have the same problem. It was just a nice drop, but didnt grab my attention to much.
Keep elevatin Hommie, Nice drop... 8 / 10

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