This Was Dope Cam. The Story Tellin' Was Absolutely Incredible. You Had Plenty Of Multi's In This Piece, And When Used, They Were Great. Flow Was Smooth Throughout, Adding To The Dopeness Of This Piece. The Story Tellin' Is What Put This Piece Over The Top Tho, As Did The Vivid Details.

The beads of sweat Bungee Jumping from the Bridge in his Nose
^^ Fantastic Detail. .

A Living Great was something id always Aspired to Achieve
I put my Blood and Sweat into this Sport, and thats what cost me
^^ Great Way To End It.

Your Ability To Take A Topic Like This And Turn It Into A Dope Piece Is Amazing. I Commend You For That. I Thoroughly Enjoyed The Read. . Keep Droppin Cam.

-Formula.

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^^ Feedback Appreciated.

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