View Single Post
Old 12-02-03, 10:34 PM   #4
MiNdLeSs
Flyweight
 
MiNdLeSs's Avatar
 
Posts: 85
From: ...The Middle of Nowhere...
IP:

Spike - good flow, a few metaphors/wordplay. mostly just straight upfront ish though nothin to complex

White - had a good verse but it seemed choppy. other than that it would be sweet theres just somethin else missing but i can't think of what it is. mostly straight upfront like spikes.

Noncentz - had the most complex verse in the collab. which was good and bad. I meen u went above n beyond in vocab and just overall structure. but because of all that it didnt seem to flow as well as it could have

Vision - looks like he just cut and pasted from some previous battle. flow was on and there was nice wordplay. but it just didnt seem to fit with the others

Overall - it was decent. i understand reppin ur crew and all but how played out is that? how many crews on this site do the same exact thing? hmm.... try doin something different... more creativity not in individual verses but in the song/rhyme structure itself.

(gets off his soapbox)
__________________
I tried to rewind time but my hindsight is blind
Send a message via AIM to MiNdLeSs   Reply With Quote