REPLIED TO
edicus
potent
camarac

SPIKE SANDERS
Pickin up where I left off/ Rollin wit a new crew/So no more gettin slept on/
Im Stealin deals like clepto’s to become bigger than dead wrong/
It’s the same song all around the world/
Like Jacko in im fucking up boys and girls/
Some say I came in too fast/ State your class/ like fags I can be a pain in the ass/
Always Roc a fella like damon dash/
At my pace im so hot youll get blazed to ash/
I am the dopest jus know that g/
Like hurricanes in FL I steadily blow back trees/
Im not tired just unmotivated
theres so much hate I use anger as a way to flow the greatest/
youll get smoked theres no debatin/ methods assassin like I snipe/
forget the hype ill let you drive by and catch a bullet in the eye/
Or put crack in a weed pipe/
let you smoke the whole thing so you cant see right/
You just dont know what ya gettin into when ya fuck with NUCLEAR CONCEPTS/
Cause bitch we dont work with tecks, we work with BOMB threats/
So go head an start shit i'll just have WORD aim FAT BOY 2 at you an your whole set/
Push the button, blow ya asses sky high an walk away with no regrets/
Or we could do this mic style/
Spit shit so complex have ya head spinin like a turn style/
Cause ya see, were the new breed/
Mcs a the future,a crew so ill wont hesitate rip you with rhymes or cock back and shoot ya/
but if you need to know sumthin just know this/
WORD~PERFECT may be the Don, but im the one woh he'll send to assainate you bitch/

WHITELIGHTNING
I Tell A Story That Every Human Can Relate
It's Not Giberish, It's Simple Which Causes Hate
Why Is It So Hard For You Bitches To Admit
I'm Better Than What Half You Can Spit
Not Seen As a Champion, I Achieved It By Fluke
My Four and O record Means Nothing? Ingrateful Puke!
Your Jealousy Rages Due To Permanent Writers Block
Can't Find The Key To Fix The Lock
I Accept All Challenges, The Results Are Identical
I Come Out On Top With The Better Topical
Swallow The Shit, And Continue To Write
I Still Hit Hard With Incredibly Might
Imagination Is Deep, Unique Not Differ
Capture Both Roles And Expose The Character
You'll Know When Actions Are Frozen, Looks Fazed
Shock 'n' Awe Campaign, Clearly Dazed
Just Give Me My Deserved Recognition, No Longer Underrated
Can Continue Griping People, And Stop Being Hated

HOOK: from start to finish-everything gets deminished-
we the unbmemished-untarnish hardest flames that cant be extinquished.
against any of us you couldnt be saved by a bible-
your decease by delivery meaning Dead On Arrival.

NONCENTZ
Im one of the illest m.c.’s-to rip alphabetically-
everything from a.d. to b.c.-Get coherintly ripped…biogenetically.
To me….
If it lives it breathes-which means its seseptible to disease-
since I spit the illest things….. I Amplify my 98 farenheit to 104 degrees.
imagine the sickness I can spread from a sneeze-
imagine the each drop with over a milli0on bacteria to releace-
and you really think your fucken with me???please.....
100 years ago I would taken control of the world with ease-
a thousand before I would have been found guilty of sorcery.
In ten lines I spit the 10 commandments in ten hyms-
Chronologically….align pardadigms and crucify within my rhymes.
We call it nuclear consepts-
cause we the cause of 90 percent of bomb threats-
The results of chemical reaction once spittens’ ....
added to written context.
Any battles the match… used for flamable schemattics utilized to commit arson wit-
Afterwards scientists dissect our poisonous text and find traces of arsenec.
Im one of the most vicious on microphones-
ahead of time regardless of watches set to all 4 north American time zones.
The lord of this with archeologists-carbon dating these flows-
To a time where land once inherited but was subject to erode.
The result that causes the a disturancy-
h20 minus the sodium means in condensed form I add in~sa(u)lt to injuries.
Spike, white, vision, and me- 4 stage of H.I.V-from birth teen maturity and seniority-we a nuclear holocaust mixed with napalm debree.

vision of vengeance
I'm an "optimistic" lyrically,trsounds gay to me
dont believe a letter of his rap, he's a "Lya" from A to Z
your punches fail to be effective cos your knuckles on the floor
that's why your style is "assed out" cos you stay on all 4's
while you assault more little boys than Catholic Priests
forcing their cock down your throat like "religious beliefs"
you facing "da-feet", saying you watching out for their "soles"
we could start a "Holy War", you'll be the one left with the holes
left in the cold, I pepper-spray your ass, now you got tha "hot shit"
I stone you to death, now you got something you can "rock with"
you type like a corny locksmith, you leave me "key-bored"
I send you beaten "back to the Hospital", go get your "re-ward"
stupid retard, think you got "half-li



HOOK: from start to finish-everything gets deminished-
we the unbmemished-untarnish~ hardest flames that cant be extinquished.
against any of us you couldnt be saved by a bible-
your decease by delivery meaning Dead On Arrival.

uppen

YO GOOD SHIT EVERYONE.
AND DONT SLEEP ON THIS PIECE.
PEACE.

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NUCLEAR CONCEPTS- DA ILLEST CREW

Niggas we dont work with tecks, we work with BOMB threats/
So fuck with us and i'll have WORD aim FAT BOY 2 at you and your whole set/- S.S.

Spike - good flow, a few metaphors/wordplay. mostly just straight upfront ish though nothin to complex

White - had a good verse but it seemed choppy. other than that it would be sweet theres just somethin else missing but i can't think of what it is. mostly straight upfront like spikes.

Noncentz - had the most complex verse in the collab. which was good and bad. I meen u went above n beyond in vocab and just overall structure. but because of all that it didnt seem to flow as well as it could have

Vision - looks like he just cut and pasted from some previous battle. flow was on and there was nice wordplay. but it just didnt seem to fit with the others

Overall - it was decent. i understand reppin ur crew and all but how played out is that? how many crews on this site do the same exact thing? hmm.... try doin something different... more creativity not in individual verses but in the song/rhyme structure itself.

(gets off his soapbox)

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I tried to rewind time but my hindsight is blind

aigh't first off, word perfect ur shit was down like it always is, spike work on ya structure a bit try to make ur lines matching length makes for an easier read, unless u were doin tht purposely for flow, whitelightning ur flow seemed a bit choppy but good use of vocab, and vision ur verse was aigh't good use of multi's pretty basic rhyme scheme though. but other then that everything else seemed pretty down cept maybe the hook could use a lil work. but keep droppin bro's some nice shit. peace.

peep my new open mic "Freedom" and leave some feedback if u got the time. thanx in advance. peace.

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This was a nice collab...Everyone did their part....Ya all had sum nice multis and wordplay....But this line was kinda whack....
"Always Roc a fella like damon dash"
^^^Sounded gay as fuck

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