aigh't first off, word perfect ur shit was down like it always is, spike work on ya structure a bit try to make ur lines matching length makes for an easier read, unless u were doin tht purposely for flow, whitelightning ur flow seemed a bit choppy but good use of vocab, and vision ur verse was aigh't good use of multi's pretty basic rhyme scheme though. but other then that everything else seemed pretty down cept maybe the hook could use a lil work. but keep droppin bro's some nice shit. peace.

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