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Old 12-02-03, 11:59 PM   #26
Meters
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Gotta say Explicit on this one. Impressive vocabulary you have there man but maybe sometimes you should integrate it with your ideas a little bit better so it doesn't make things choppy. You had some good punches though and good flow and rhyme scheme and that's what you took this with.

Rhymes, you're definitely elevating, keep it up dawg! Good battle guys.
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