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Rhymes 0 0%
Explict 5 100.00%
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Old 12-02-03, 12:07 AM   #1
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Explict vs Rhymes

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No-Crew. Hate. d/r votes
No-feddin

Blind Spit.
verse due 40min after check in.

ALL votes must be explained


Checkin in.....


GOOD LUCK!!!
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Old 12-02-03, 12:09 AM   #2
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goodluck to you also

this my checkin see you in


40min


peace

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Old 12-02-03, 12:48 AM   #3
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Mic out your teeth and rip out your vocal cords and tie them around your neck make it a suicide with a rope...

Xtreme Pussy spills s.o.s verses of himself, full of chills , cold of Aids and no your Rhymes are but Dope...

This Totsie Roll with corn rolls on to tight think twice pray to christ you jus might die tonight...

This Rap game tied up in gold chains, Explicit ima frame on my wall and spit shine you all night...

Your just as tough as the houses you built, the lines you state is as stright as the mic you lick...

its through it you speak and breath not stroke and toung play like your boyfriends dick...

D.O.I biggist mastake was lettin you in, no good came out of you they just need 8 friends to begin...

your heart broken like your step mom wen i left her six kids with no bread and 7th child within...

im leathal with this mic, i dropped the gates and blades with this im i'll contegous and on top still...

Your still an mc who stands on stage chokes and feels your own nuts jus quit and i'll write your will...


lay you six feet under with no cover suffer through the after life carry this battle with you...

i'll call tupacs angels number to jump over to you and slapp the lines you wrote leave a simple FUCK YOU...


explanation on some stuff

Xtreme Pussy=XP look over his bio
just as tough as the houses you built= occupation construction
 
Old 12-02-03, 01:05 AM   #4
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Re: Explict vs Rhymes

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Quote:
Originally posted by Explict
10-25 lines

No-Crew. Hate. d/r votes
No-feddin

Blind Spit.
verse due 40min after check in.

ALL votes must be explained





jus so you no and everyone goin to vote


peace
 
Old 12-02-03, 01:12 AM   #5
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Rhymes, hope your ready for an extraordinary coronary
call ahead to the coroner, and I'll escort you to the mortuary

Hmph..this kid is a mistake, misery on a plate
don't need utensils for this victory,
this dumb crumb is OK to waste

face the fact, your laced with wack,
you should've passed on that extra crack,
I got the ax in tact,
I'm up to the task but your the hack

there's no fix for his limp wristed rhymes
kid, stick with spyrographics, my chiropractic practice
will leave you ravaged

cats hunger for my madness,
while you sit in wonder like Freddy Savage
Catch a dick you pathetic prick,
your rhetoric is set to miss,
I spit hectic wreck-less script to push you off this precipice
here's my hypothesis,
your bound to bleed from my synopsis, you post protein deposits,
like your trying to squeeze the sperm out your esophagus

I'll mop up this mess,
you're not tight, you lack the style and the gumption,
somethin not right when you come to a cockfight with a penile
erectile dysfunction
Watch this dweeb drop to his knees,
fucker should've learned to bob and weave,
he's catchin lumps when I spew chunks and left Rhymes drunk with his dry heaves
look, sorry about the headaches and my bad for the length,
but, if you need something for the pain I suggest Tylenol extra strength.
so if I refer to you as my dog, what I really mean is you my bitch..
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Old 12-02-03, 01:17 AM   #6
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nice drop
lets get some votes

peace


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Old 12-02-03, 01:21 AM   #7
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....Hmm
flow-XP
punches-XP
multis-Xp
closer-Rhyme
opener-Xp
personals-rhyme

winner- Xp
nice battle to yas both.....
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Old 12-02-03, 02:09 AM   #8
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thanks for your time and your vote.. good verse u had there Rhymes............................................ .................................................. .....................
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Old 12-02-03, 02:54 AM   #9
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overall from what i seen, xplicit won this one. he had a hot verse with some excellent vocab and some hard punches. rhymes, you had some decent personals but ya flow was off some and i wasnt quite feeling it. good battle overall, though.
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Old 12-02-03, 03:19 AM   #10
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I think both flows were choppy, but both had ok punches. Overall though i think explicit came a little harder. Plus rhymes you started off pretty wack but the last part of your verse was cool, just not consistent enough with the flow and punches as EX was.
 
Old 12-02-03, 10:49 AM   #11
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aight thanx for the votes so far


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Old 12-02-03, 02:09 PM   #12
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appriciate the those that took the time to vote.........uppin for some votes............................................. ......(1)
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Old 12-02-03, 03:03 PM   #13
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uuupppiiinnn 2

more votes you'll drop a link and we'll return the favour



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Old 12-02-03, 06:33 PM   #14
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common people please stop sleepin on this battle. you wouldn't like it if people slept on yours.. uppin (2)............................................... ......
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Old 12-02-03, 06:38 PM   #15
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i say that explicit wonthis one.he had good flow,good lines and a killer opener. rhymes had a killer closer though.but overall i say that explicit took this one
 
 


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