A King Missing a Queen...
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IP:
I didnt know you are aloud to vote on your own crew hommie. Why is that legel here, but not in the Front lines, and such?
( and yes I know both of them are in your crew, But not with rules battle. I just wanna know why this is aloud. )
-Mental God, you where straight hommie. I wasnt feeling it to much, not that its bad or anything. I think your flow dropped off at some points of time. Maybe work on Vocab as well...
-Thrust, I thought this was pretty good. I liked the vocab, and the flow of the lines. My only suggestion is to work on a better rhyme scheme. Other than that, good imagery and allusions. Nice drop hommie, worked with the topic good.
Vote - Thrust
OUT
-High Class a.k.a Confusion
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