Names? Biologically: Paul and Saul can mend the fervorness. .
& what's an epic without names - for all intensive purposes
Youthful as any, both characters designed to be like Socrates
While Webster himself couldn't do better defining mediocrity
Paul's outgoing. . Generic preachers and teachers had liked him
An incomplete profile without saying his features were striking
Social accolades built him; friends provided a thunderous grievance
The tell-tale battle as potential collides with underachievement
That is, in education; now, as we enter the hallway to Hell
The playing field is even - school: a place where Saul could excel
Out-of-shape & acne-ridden. . A mind not pompous but astounding
Confident; needless to say, Saul's still conscious of surroundings
Another blasé teen scripture? Don't debate my kin, be patient. .
Because I wouldn't have written this without greater implications
A captor had entered now, and both boys' souls were pocketed
The captor realized, minus geography, he'd captured polar opposites
But with a clear mind, the captor left his endeavor spun & smothered
Sadly, without his help, such a link would've never been discovered
So he dissected mentalities. . Without help, he soothed their tension
All the while laughing at more examples of self-induced depression
Captor smirks, returning souls; Paul & Saul would yield a dependant plea
Society was unmasked and laughing as he revealed his identity. .
With joyless lives, Paul & Saul would rebound - with "true" hate, though
The captor wins again, for the individuals had found a new scapegoat
in Society
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