yo honestly this piece overall came w/ a tight flow n rythm..thats wot caught it the most...when you was ryhming you spreaded it out instead of keeping it constant which was a nice feature for me...
the story was nice n reflected more of a feeling n was pretty intense after i read it a couple of times...keep it up dawg..pz

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