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auspicious

you catch burns- when its my turn-
the only thing stoppen from ending up in a coffin...
is me being burried in a urn.to whomever it concearns.....
the way i display wordplay -is the release of sun rays-
and heat waves-when it relays.......
leaves those who say im not hot douced in flames....
just by pressing play.
im one of those most hated-but ill no man can debate it-
you aint fucking with me...
just leaving blue balled and sexually frustrated.
i rip them.... even your top ten wont survive battling the god-
i'll place in the top 2 out of 5 when i beat all the odds.
say what you want but you aint one of the greats-
you should work for DOMINOES the way your delivery gets ate.
other then that you cant rap........ just act-
and the way your flow goes- your playing the role of an asshole.
step back.....
before a metaphor leaves you tore and worn-
cause you suck like you played lead in a gay porn
in 1 line i serve a whole rhyme a flatline-
the only way you avoid getting served...
is if glutony becomes a crime.
YOU AINT SHIT.....
and you cant rhyme-so how you spit dime?
when you a bitch that couldnt afford a loss on debit-
so you got your crew to co sign to try an add credit.
better forfeit...or have your crew pay for it-
trying to diss this m.c.-
but my lines are all relative.. so they'll kill you and your family tree.
my uncut dope lines leave one out every 2 afflicted-
with the other 1 fiend ing for a punchline and end up wise~crack addicted.
why you stressen? unless your the one im adressen-
im just schoolen in a practice session-
i havnet began teaching you the real lesson.
when class start-im ripping everything apart-
even my own fans...
the minute they give me love they forfeit rights to their heart.
plus raw pucklines left me with calisus in my hand.....
besically every thing you produce is just crap-
your cd lamanent is the closest you come to a tight (w)rap.

wat can i say
tight flow,nice vocab, hot flow
9/10

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damn son.....i state word yo, u is fo sho one of the nicest up on rb son without a doubt. I liked the way you started yo rhyme....you had some nice lines and mad nice wordplay and vocab. Sick ass drop son.....keep doin yah thang, 1

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" So for the 2nd time [The Pharisses] summoned the man who had been blind and said
"Speak the truth before God. We know this man is a sinner."
"Wether he is a sinner I do not know."
:The man replied:
"All I know is this...Once I was blind and now I can see"
John 1x 24-26

thanks twin

UPPIN

yo honestly this piece overall came w/ a tight flow n rythm..thats wot caught it the most...when you was ryhming you spreaded it out instead of keeping it constant which was a nice feature for me...
the story was nice n reflected more of a feeling n was pretty intense after i read it a couple of times...keep it up dawg..pz

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"Woop Woop, its the sound of da police"

How long did it take you to write that. It must have taken ages. Good one!

chris i take no more then 20 mins to write a verse this was a lucky one where i was listening to the right beat and in the illuminatting mood that over comes my spirit.the out come was something that i did for me and no matter what i could say i was happy with. as long as you do that you look at your songs and are proud of the product everything you spit will be hot......i keep faith in that

20 minuits? man, that would have taken me alot longer than 20 muinits! You and I must have totally different stratigies when it comes to writing rhymes because it takes me hours just to write one, sometimes even days! Sometimes I just give up and come back to it a few days later!

nothing wrong witht hat its just a deeper passion

^^^Damn son, thats sig material right their lol. Very well put and true.......gotta agree wit that, 1

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*R.I.P*
Jimmy L. , Louis L. , Aj R. , Tyler R. , Chris R., Dan W. , Matt F.......
" You all will never be forgotten and your spirits live within us all!!! R.I.P*"


" So for the 2nd time [The Pharisses] summoned the man who had been blind and said
"Speak the truth before God. We know this man is a sinner."
"Wether he is a sinner I do not know."
:The man replied:
"All I know is this...Once I was blind and now I can see"
John 1x 24-26

a'ight, unlike most the peeps that responded, this isn't that spectacular.. IE-LOCO with the 9/10... nah... maybe ..MAYBE a 7..

your vocab was sub-par compared to what i've seen u do, flow was very basic.. an' content was well general.. i dno dawg, i seen u do alot better, u gettin' lazy... i liked it still, but it could've been alot better... 1

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Best thing uve produced so far from what ive seen... keep it up.

BLUNT just for you pop i will go back to other styles this was experimenting a lil at the same time maintaing my original style i try to be diverse and i was hoping you wouldnt catch the flaw.....i hate you lol