I think double-0 seven was a little harsh on the structure coz it wasnt as bad as he made it sound but it wasnt really good either. Just elevate.
As for your rhymescheme, I wasnt really feelin it much, you need to be a little more creative and add some multi's and you'll do a lot better.
Overall I've seen worse but the whole topic I wasnt really feelin.
keep droppin and practisin. 5/10

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