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Old 12-04-03, 01:14 PM   #4
Gangsta One
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Originally posted by double-0 seven
your structure needs a little work, your lines all all mixed length, ranging really long and pretty short.

some wack wordplay, and some aiight,
expand you vocabulary.

aiight drop,
not the best thought.


peep 'racist' me and TAG collab, i'm putting it up soon


werd to wat he said, dawg. I think it was stl an a'ight piece tho...I give it a 5/10...

Drop a word at me n E-Lyrical's mic, comin up soon...
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