I appreciate the story that MKN told, I do...

And I like the originality of having God pop in there like that.

But, again with the gangsta stuff?

PLAYED concept, I know alot of rap started outta the ghetto, with gangs and shit...

But it's been a story told for almost 2 decades now.

And, frankly, I'm tired of hearing it.

Still, it was a good verse, ya flow and multi's in the first part were sick.

You started stretching lines in the last part and it kinda hurt ya flow some, but overall the imagery was dead on, I was brought into this gang battle despite not wanting to go to the same played place again.

7.75/10

Mystery's was pretty exceptional...

I like the deepness and the questions this raised in my head.

Plus, I like history, this was dope to include some.

I could just relate more to this, simple as that.

And the Billy Joel hook was a nice touch.

8.50/10

Neither one came with exceptional wordplay or voacb.
This one came down to feeling the emotion of the piece and I felt MM's more...

Great work from both.

Peace

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