5hifty - That was a decent verse. You had I think about 2 punches in there that landed really nice. They wernt played or anything. The structure, and rhyme scheme could use a little work. But thats nothing time cant do for ya...

Walter Wall - I dont know if this is as good as you are, maybe a bad day. But I wasnt feeling ya verse to much, I felt things were forced to much. You had 1 really good punch in there. But alot of the time, it doesnt match with multiple punches. Your flow was good and all of that. Structure was straight, maybe make a better rhyme scheme...

Because of the punches Vote - 5hifty

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-High Class a.k.a Confusion

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