ignore everyone who has posted before me.

ok, work on your structure..i.e. make sure that you are always countin syllables when you are writing so that you arent jamming so much into one bar, next, try to up your vocab.. if you have bigger words people will think that you are smarter...and people love to hear smart peoples opinions. Dont start every bar with 'i got', try to work more of a flow into it... and please, dont ever call yourself 'Miss Congeniality'