LMAO at ^him ... But it's true ... I read that and was like ... Wat the Fuck!?!? ... But yea ... U don't need the "/"s ... We know how to read text pieces ... Work on vocab ... Rhyme scheme ... Multiple rhymin' ... Also called multi's ... Wordplay ... Such as flippin' words and shit ... Stuff like that ... Read some of the other people's stuff ... U'll catch on ... I ain't really got time to explain ... But U can also get help on ur ish in the Wackness Emergency Center forum ... But basically ... Juss keep writin' ... It'll come to you ... Peace