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IP:
ight, i thought the length of this piece could have been stretched out a bit coz it would av been good to read more.
Out of your raps, Your back with a ghost write
Now when you write personal, you write ghost
i liked this line especially as the ending to both sentences i thought were very good, although it didnt rhyme.
a few good multis and vocab was average in here.
6/10
hows dat.
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