nicely written piece
it seemed to focus more on the message, feelings and thoughts more then any of the technical stuff, like structure, but it still sounds good, and shows i good detail and a strong message.
this topic tends to be done quiet a bit, but you still kept me interested and focused on what i was reading. you added your own touch to it.
the simple intro drew me for some reason, im not sure why, and the outro was great.
keep it up!

~Tera~
DONT HATE

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