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Old 12-11-03, 09:22 PM   #4
rule
..Soft Focus..
 
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you really went showed your potential here man...probably your best drop yet...you had some really creative lines...a lot of positive things to say...your chorus was good, your structure fell off but you really made up for it in your wordplay very well done...keep it up peace mayn your doin good
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