Mental God - That was a very nice verse... I was feeling the vocab, subject matter, flow, and the rhyme scheme was pretty good as well. You came with somthing uniqe, I can tell you put some thought into this...

Then On A Midsummer's Eve, Somebody Questioned Perfection
Gathered A Collection, And Then Promised Them Protection
^ I was feeling those lines right there, my favorite ^
Nice drop hommie...

Phil.M.Up - I liked the vocab, and the metaphores that were in there. The flow and rhyme scheme were pretty basic though. I wasnt feeling where you took the topic that much either. You did have a couple bars in there that really caught my attention...

doubtfull Intuition telling me there was Evil scowling the Air
suddenly I break into Prayer and tell the Lord "please be Fair"
^ I like it when people bring some religion into the rap ^

Vote - Mental God
Conclusion - He just was better all around. Both verses were good, but mental god took this in about every area... Nice drops from both of you though...

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-High Class a.k.a Confusion

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