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Old 12-12-03, 11:59 PM   #11
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From: Hayes, VA aka Haze-where its hard ta see
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def goin tha opposite way with my vote..............deacons opinion was more apparent and vivid, nyce twist rob, tha break down:

deacon: rhyme scheme: 8, flow: 7, story: 7.5, total: 22.5

rob: rhyme scheme: 6.5, flow: 7, story: 8, total: 21.5

rob your rhyme scheme hurt you and tha length kinda hurt you, good angle but you could have ran with it more.......

my vote goes to deacon, no hard feelins....may tha best man win....go peep my battle, stay real, peace, 1

and ooh yeah.......deacon i undastand that that is your opinion....but i totally disagree....no one else would have manned up in tymes of war and terror, and you cant get rid of tha union...tha building block of america, ( tha north) tha people that won tha fight.....think about it
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