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Old 12-15-03, 09:33 PM   #7
rule
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this was a good piece, your stanzas were all really creative good indepth desriptions i felt you had some really good lines in this you captured the reader really well, good drop.

If you have time, can you check out my poem weathers an art...thank you
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