im feelin the poem, good stuff. a reason i like it so much has to do that i feel it, and that we got similar styles.

vocab-6/10
rhymes-8/10
message-8/10
feelings-7/10
metas/similes-7/10
overall-36/50

final thoughts:felt the poem alot, and dont think of my opinion as a bad one, i like this alot, its just that its hard to acheive perfection.

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