this should not be slept on i like this awhole lot..i saw his face before my eyes too when i was reading good imagery and nice structure keep it up kid..maybe rethink the title to suttin to catch peeps eyes so this will get peeped a lil more just a thought...

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my head is clouded with senseless doubt
but this seems to be my only escape route
so ill slither my way across the ground
to avoid my blyndedsoul from being found
~*~YOU LIVE YOU LEARN~*~