This was a straight drop hommie. Telling a story, that is somthing that will keep people reading. So smart choice on the topic. Maybe work on your vocab and rhyme scheme, but thats about it. It had a consistant flow, never fell off. I was feeling a couple of lines in there alot. This was a good drop hommie.
7.5 / 10 ( only cause I grade really hard )

---> Can you return the favor and peep the link in my sig.
I know for a fact you will like it, aight hommie. much appriciated...

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-High Class a.k.a Confusion

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