Vaskez:
Man, there's so many peeps on Mim's dick, the unfairness is felt
So's no wonder, when they hit up his battles...
.................................................A LL the hits are below the belt
ok, not really feeling it much
Dunno why tho, dude's worse than most, I always said he's wack
N carrying a rucksack is the only time he's ahead of the 'pack
lol... kool wordplay
When he attacks, I'ma react calmly in this cold place
I ain't batting an eyelid, I'm damn well batting his whole face
nice punch
I'ma let ya soul waste, maybe ya felt good 'fore this started
But after I rip ya organs out...
....................................it'll be hard not to be disheartened
i'm sure ive seen that before somewhere, nice punch none the less
Heard Mim's audios? Wackness to me, but some might care for it
They listen intently with heart and mind...
...............................................cos their ears can't bear the shit
nice personal
I can almost say ya raps are out of this world, n ya skilled
Cos if ya voice was pitched any higher...
..............................it'd escape earth's gravitational field
lmao.. best punch yet
In the race for KO's, these 2 d/r each other, I seen the signs
How's Mim top 5 on RV, when he's always cuming in 9th?!
ooo. pullin em out nice personal n nameplay
Damn both y'all bars suck, poor flow, s'hard to see the rhymes
N there's no hidden meanings...
.............but peeps STILL read better shit BETWEEN the lines
simple.. but effective
Plus, seen Mim's pic? Get ya weight up 'fore ya start shit
There's enough skin n bones on display...
.........................................to start an ivory/furs market
lol... nice wordplay and punch
And that 9th kid's garbage, I'ma smack the punk hard
But at least he KNOWS his place...
........................................chillin in a fuckin junk yard
umm ok. not as ghood as the others though
overall decent verse you had some nice punches, and some ok punches. there was a couple i didn't really like but everyone has them in their verses. structure was good and your wordplay was decent deffinatly the stronger of the two verses.
DTH:
Whether you like it or not, ya credibility is shot after I gun you
I mean how you dissing me after it took you ONE WEEK to mod me in 1-2
ok opener shouldav been worded better though
Ya know it's funny your a pussy and that ya hairy n' mean
Damn, I felt bad when I learned that your alergic to dairy, queen
not feeling this one much
Punk ya rep ain't clean, you get blamed for bad shaped votes
So I'm a put you in a chokehold that you can't escape, goat
I'm hearing the hecklers, they sayin' ya the worst of the sector
Ya know bitch, all ya simple shit is ONLY overheads on projectors
ok i suppose
And your ugly as fuck too, no one's wants to hang with this gay
N' MAYBE you wouldn't be the last resort...
... if ya looks didn't scare the tide away
best punch in your verse yet
9th, you've always been a fucking clown...
I know nameplays are played to the worst, but yo this shit should hurt
How the fuck can someone with NINE degrees not write ONE good verse
lol nice
N' ya raps sound like shit too, they like just one high scream
Ya career's had such a rocky road...
... I'm surprised you haven't given up to sell ice cream
umm played? or did i not get it?
Cuz dawg ya fat n' like goodies while I like a good book that's jumpin'
But when I think of a best seller, I just think of ANY you're locked up in
lol didnt really hit hard though
This hated bitch is never is humpin', you can make a female hurl, man
North Korean troops couldn't destroy so much of a Soeul as ya girls can
ok.... pretty decent
N' that ya ugly as fuck is the word, but yeah one thing is for sure
If looks could kill...
... you'd be wanted enough to make Karl Rove much more secure
lol
ok i felt you had the weaker of the two verses... it was decent in some parts but weak in other parts.. i was expecting more when i peeped it...
Vs.
9th:
I've been known to show backbone when brawlin' in the verbal way
And you're my necks victim...until I crack ya vertebrae
nice wordplay and decent punch
My fist'll form an alliance with your jaw, have you bruised worse
But you're the only one to blame, 'cuz apparantley DaTrusHurtz
proper nameplay lol nice
Word, and when we call you a herb we ain't lyin'
Your wackness roseMary, Joseph, and even the 3 Wisemen
not bad
Plus you fight like a pussy, throw kicks at the guys n'
Have 'em catchin' enough foot-balls to win the damn Heisman
lol
Mim didn't need your help in PLL, leave him alone
'Cuz even Tom Hanks knows bitches need A League of Their Own
lmao nice punch
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Vaskez? Shit, you don't want in this war zone, g
You just call a Trus...
...and ask him to come home 'cuz you're lonely
haha pretty nice
Since your girl dipped, and showed up at my house bare
We went nuts...
...or at least she liked to Planter mouth there
lol.. this punch is pretty played
While givin' me road head, then grabbed a phone and dropped your number
To say she got a flat tire...'cuz I fuckin' popped the rubber
lol nice
Face it, you're a loser, and I'm sorry my truth's ownin'
But you're such a long distance from winnin'...
...L.I. charged you for roamin'
rofl.. nice bar
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I schooled you fucks in text, all your shit's lookin' forced
And now I just got you tuition that you never took this course
ok closure
dope verse... alot of nice punches some decent wordplay and nameplay. a couople punches were played but it didn't really hurt your verse coz you made up for it
Mim:
That shit is fucking GARBAGE.. and I now know that ya rhymes losing
At least you said it was for a laugh......cause that's all that I'm doing
lol nice opener.. effective
With your fuckin accent, trashy punches.. cant believe this man raps
And with flow so off.. you got people on the site setting up sand bags
lol nice punch
You're a fucking fag.. but my intro is confusing, you ain't stayin tough
I don't know why I asked people to play your lines..
..cause your lines are played enough
ok.. can be classed as played, but you worded it decent enough for me
Just ridiculous... but your elevation is slow... why does this herb write?
Vas been texting for over 6 MONTHS and STILL can't rhyme words right
lol ill personal
One syllable rhyming.. newb shit, but fuck that, you got nothing to lose
..I don't even need to add punches to show Hurt is still cumming in you
ooo... best punch of the battle.. lol looks like the comnig in 9th one but flipped alot better
DaTrusHurtz, you're fucking garbage too.
But I thought we were keeping it clean?.. I knew nothing would stay fine
And I would follow DaTrus..
..if I wanted my verse to be generic punches and played lines
ok.. reminds me of the other bar bout vaskez....
Prewritten bullshit.. trash.. but in the PLL, I did ask you for help one time
And I only asked you to mod in hopes that you wouldn't post a punchline
lol decent,
Savin the league.. and lookin at the sponsors, it's ill.. but whats worse is
You're only a Mix Champ..
..cause you put together the best lines from other people's verses
o shit lol... could be a fake personal?
Some herb shit.. you were predicted to lose.. you wanna know why, kid?
Cause I've done better then you in EVERY fucking league that I've tried in
lol nice personal there
Should be hidin.. Instead of stepping to us.. you suck, dont you see queer
Your leaving such a Yung Impression..
..I thought I was battling the team that should be here
lol ok closure
overall dopest verse out of the other 3 you had a better verse than 9th with more quotables.. nice shit
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ok.. now for the vote.
v/ 9th and mim
they were more consistant with their punches personals and wordplay... structure was overall better. and both stayed on target n shit... da trus let vaskez down.. his verse wasn't as good as his which was shamefull coz this couldav been a real close battle
dope shit though
no hate.