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Old 05-29-05, 02:02 PM   #19
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Quote:
Originally Posted by SPuL aka Reckless

Lookin' at your pic, I see you suffer from the munchies
Cuz you got enough fat in your cheeks, to feed 7 thirdworld countries
ahhhh, dude is def. not fat.... i thought by munchies u meant it looked like he was a weedsmokin skater, but this bar was kinda blah.... 5/10
Facin' an "alien" like you? Nope, not what I demanded
Shit, look at the light behind you, man, your mothership jus landed!!
lol, real nice personal/punch, hillarious..... 8/10
Damn, kid, you're a mistake, wit skater shirt. Dude, you're wack to me
Your birth certificate?...................................... ........
.................................................. .. A sorry letter from condom factories
i really hated this bar...... kinda weak setup, the wordplay about birth certifcates is ok, but the whole your a mistake/condom malfunction shit was played before i started rappin..... 5/10
You could race against turtles and slugs, but couldn't beat 'em
Man, you couldn't come in first, if you replaced Adam in Eden
weakish setup, but the punch was pretty decent, although it didnt real hard.. 7/10
And you kno Canadian's gay, and always doggy style fuck
Y'all only do it that way, so y'all can BOTH watch the puck
another decent bar......but not much to say about this one....... 7/10
Kid, sittin' wit all that "hair"..... he looks like a "Survivor" nut
If this shit was the show, Drake's not the only thing that should be cut
ehh, i get the punch/wordplay but its not that much of a strong diss.. "ohhhh he told u to cut ur hair!!!" .... see not really sumthin harsh. lol, i dont see y u needed the quotes in their either..... 6/10
Wet Willy shoves his dick up Drake's behind, cuz that shit makes him cushy
Then he shoves it down Drakel's mouth, cuz it's the closest he gets to pussy
i almost thought u were dissin Wet Willy more.... playedness with the concept..... weak closer to me. 5.5/10

43.5/70



Quote:
Originally Posted by Drakel
officially back now, RV's better off, so this bitch should know
the only time you'll have a hit single, is inpersonating ichiro
LMAO......... very very nice..... 8/10
while RV has had its fill of whack lately, spul is over-eating
you got re-named 'rec-less' after you were banned for cheating
i think they were kinda at the same time, but the whole bar and punch was still very effective...... 7.5/10
look into comedy man, you got some talent there, thats a fact
you could really make it big, just make your text is the act
i unno, wat confused sum people, if u take out the "is" after "text," the bar makes perfect sense...... lol, punch was ok, but not as hard.. 6.5/10ya hit bottom, so after a year you think the only place to go is higher
shit, you're known by two names but yet i still havn't heard of either
...... ehhh, u kinda explained earlier u knew his names, so this bar was pretty weak.... 5/10
aint mushroom for losers, especially when its you whos molding a career
cause only time you pounding anybody, is when youre holding their beers
lmao........ nice lil punch after those two weak ones...... 8/10
spul aint nobody to fear, just a wannabe tryna hold a mic
i pitch my verse to him, blows by like its his third strike
eh........ concept is ok, didnt hit hard.... 5.5/10aint no competition, spul needs a boost to come out with the greater grade
so he goes sucks off some crocs, cause he saw a commercial for gator-ade
better, but u only had two really great lines in this verse..... 6/10

46.5/70


V/Drakel........
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