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Old 06-11-05, 05:03 PM   #9
E.C
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IP:

i wann be the first person to vote... lol

jack the ripper:

Wanted this postponed?, the kid's shook, doubt ya show soon
Cuz when I say that you Jet-Son... I aint calling you cartoons
^^ lol decent opener, funny punch 8/10
Listen for the truth, faggot, and just watch how I expose you
Cuz if ya GW, it's no wonder your verses always get a "boooh!"
^^ good concept and good punch 7/10
Kids was 'all-aboard' when ya made the 'ship', i'll smack your lip
Rocking the boat, I hit "9-D" and... sunk his whole 'battle-'ship
^^ haha this was dope man 8.5/10
Feel that bitch? you know you could never come with some wit
But peeps say your verses are 'stable'... hay... n' utter bullshit
^^ this was ok i wasnt really feelin it as much as the others 6.5/10
Little faggot, I don't even think a migit could come up shorter
I'm droppin this 9... like the gunshop just canceled the order
^^ nice lol migit, decent nameple and good punch 8/10
You’re my apprentice kid, will he win KORV 2? Ha!!! Hell nope!
When this bitch 'un-leashes' her rhymes, we never collar dope
^^ another dope concept and good punch 7.5/10
Hurting you lyrically, this is a blow-out, fuck down to the wire
I got Degree kept in torchair(torcher) like I lit his seat on fire
^^ this made ma laugh lol 8.5/10
Play boardgames with his brain, leave him 'scrabled' and shook
Then cut his body into chess/chest pieces to show he's a 'rook'
^^ nice punch, good play on chess, 7.5/10
Firing shots off at your crew yo, got bitches hiding in the trench
Fuck ghost writers, man, i'll kill 9... and Degree will be the tenth
^^ lol this made ma laugh this was dope name and crew play 9/10
9 is obedient to his master, and he's learned well under my wing
So this clown'll make a grandg-gesture(jester) when I'm the king
^^ nice took me a while but it was creative... 8.5/10

overll: 79/100

i liked your verse alot i thought you had some dope wordplay and some real nice punches and concepts, structure was perfect and flow was on point, i thought there was about 2 bars which wern't as good as the otheres but they were still good... overall you had a dope verse and its going to be hard to beat, good job fam


9th degree:




Honestly, you're nothing special, and I ain't one to bluff
I'd chew you up and spit you out, but you ain't even up to snuff
^^ good opener good wordplay and good punch, 7.5/10
He wont reign, I'm stormin' upon his horizon of thoughts
And take this cats 9 lives without needing some time to paws
^^ haha very creative man nice. 8/10
What's the cause? Well you got cocky and thought you had Degree
Plan was all mapped out, so I'll compiss on your strategy
^^ nice again u have good wordplay man 7.5/10
I'm savage, g, I almost gay bashed and had your faggot ass kicked
But you never came out the closet...you just stayed in there to jacket
^^ nice nameplay and more wordplay wit a good punch, 8.5/10
How'd you ever get to the championship? I mean the fact is
I grazed through like half your battles and couldn't get pasture wackness
^^ haha this had me laughing 8.5/10
You can't hack it, skill level is way below perfection
So I'm bout to axe you, and I'm not a black kid with a question
^^^ not really feeling this as much as the others 6/10
Suggested a battle before but you said "No P, later"
I expected the duck, even your alias is the e-vader
^^ nice nameplay agen, nice punch 8/10
Plus your main account suggests biting, so now I'm actin' bitter
I'm so flat out tired of you I'm about to Jack The Ripper
^^ used his whole name lol 7.5/10
Had enough, friend? That's how it might look
But you revved my engine, so InturnI'll comebustchins with a right hook
^^ nice flow was a lil bit choppy though 7/10
This battle's a waste of my time, so instead of crackin' your clock
I killed you online, now have the admins put Jack in a box
^^To me this was your best bar 9/10

overall: 77.5/100

ight man u had a real nice verse.. some dope namplay and some good concepts, structure was different but it worked well... flow was good but it was off in 1 part... other than that u had some real nice shit in there good job fam..



This was real close but imma give it to jack the ripper i felt his punches were more entertaining and had better concepts and wordplay behind them, dont get me wrong 9th had a solid verse but it wasn't enough to stop the ripper lol...

v/ Jack The Ripper
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