Record 0-1, dont come at me with that senitmental shit
Yeah Life's Unfair to bitches whos raps are ludicrous
Your a traitor rap, why dont you try a shot at punk rock
Since your lifes so hard, you got their concept on lock
You probly got a rich family, livin in the lap of luxury
Another thug wannabe, we got enough of those on rv
Your a hustler? Then why you online battlin emcees
Why dont we see you droppin hot shit on mtv?
Cuz your flows wack, and you write in a fuckin paragraph
You just joined and already startin down the wrong path

the flow n structure thing i new from openmics hes posted and the other shit...just check his profile