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Old 06-05-05, 11:15 AM   #17
E.C
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ight like i said in the other battle i aint gonna have enough time to go through it properly so imma jus break it down fast as i can...

sPuL: ight man ive seen u drop harder than this... i dnt know what it was but i wasn't really feeling your verse as much as i thought i would... maybe it was the flow or the structure... punches were good, you had some played shit in there but it wasn't that bad..

here is 1 bar i liked:

You ain't gon win here, man, my rhymes are jus too mean
You're gonna go and end up short, and I ain't talkin' about your jeans
^^ this was a good personal made me laugh lol

here is 1 bar i didn't like:


Take you to tha "House of pain" was "jumpin around" in pic
only way you'll "ever-last" "hard", is some viagra, you "dick!"
^^ first line was igth but the second line was wack as fucckkk

56/100

ive seen you drop better fam... you still had a good verse just not as strong as i thought it would be... good job though

9th Degree:

ight i thuoght your verse was real good... you had decent wordplay and some decent punches in there... structure was good and flow was good, i wasn't feelin a couple of lines but the ones i was feelin were real dope

here is 1 bar i did like:


They'll get you banned again, and you'll deny it, fess up and spill guts
Oh well, you're the RV vampire - if you bit you'd still suck
^^ dope wordplay and dope punch!

here is 1 bar i didn't like:


And if you're always biting and cheatin' then what you still flow for?
You got band from RV more than Livestrong in '04
^^ this was ight but i wasn't feelin it as muich as the others:

60/100

ight imma give this to 9th i felt he dropped harder and stayed more consistant in this battle... i also thought he had better wordplay through the verse...

v/ 9th
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