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Old 05-28-05, 06:41 PM   #4
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Wet Willy
Drive to your 9 to 5…and sing along to the radio…sorry to break your heart fool
Not talking bout the Network, when I say as far as you’ll get in rap is Car-Toons
decent punch here, but ur bar is kinda stretched........ 5/10
You want Publicity? Sorry, you’ll never get it in music…so switch grinds
Getting smacked with Cordoroy Pillows is the only way you’ll make HeadLines
ahhhhh real weak setup..... weak rhymin at the end... ok punch but not really feelin this bar 3/10
HotShh is a fake son...Honesty isnt exceeding in his catagories of Fire B
Thats why he sits on top of Pinnochios face...and yells out "Lie To Me"
lol... this was pretty funny, nice setup.. but not the hardest of hittin so 6/10
Hotshh is wack and that’s that…he seems so hopeless if you’ll notice
persue your dreams Hot, and end up like lice on bald men…homeless
lol....... i liked this line for sum reason.... kinda funny, 7/10
Son attends counseling...admitting his RV problems; "Marv's Gay" he boasts
im sorry to inform you..Hard-Ons from Marv's beef doesnt count as personal growth
ehhhhh 5/10, i thought u were gonna do sum "Marvs Gay"/Marvin Gaye wordplay there, and it didnt pan out..
Read Hot's Shh backwards..he's about to come clean cause every man should
Hot uses the best TacTics on RV!..i mean he's Dislexic..but his Breathe smells Damn Good!
lololol, atleast u saved the best for last.... i think this was ur best overall line by far...... 9/10

36/60.... 60%


Quote:
Originally Posted by Hotshh!
As I Begin to Merk You, stop your flows til your Skin is Purple
Edit ya Title......... You're now "Outside of the Winners Circle"
ight... ehh setup, and punch is aight also with the play on his title 6/10
Your skill is low in text, couldnt 'deal a king' if you Load the Deck
Your in a "field" of "danger" ....even Rodney show you No Respect
nice nice setup.... punch was coo too... woulda been the dopest shit tho if there was an actual Rodney on the site, lmao 7/10
U'll leave this round with no fame just ashamed and Embarrassed
Check your rank, Willy...only your CREW name is "Established"
lol.... aight, but i heard a bunch of establishment lines like that before 5/10
And thats no dissing on your clique, it aint nothing they Provoked
Just the fact they let you in..... proves that they can 'Take a Joke'
lolol, liked this bar def......... 8/10
Why you gloating on that shitty verse for Common you Posted
You dont invent, U "Invek" and take the credit when he Wrote It*
ehh nice personal and revealin u did, but it really was weak hittin.... 6/10
So whether its Genocide...... Lucifer..... Wet Willy or Buddha
We wont stop at RB, soon you'll be banned from your Computer
ha aight aight, this was decent, 6/10
So if Willy say he "dropped fire"....... he's Replacing Employers
You couldnt take "a tourney" home... if you was Dating a Lawyer!
niceeeeeeee, really good closer also, but not as good as willys to me, 8/10

46/70 ......... 65.7%


nice battle, but my vote goes to Hotshh!
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