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Old 04-03-06, 09:01 AM   #5
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Black Poet
 
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From: London
IP:

Dam fam's this was well dope, it was a really good read I like this bit:

Now the selfish
Walk their cracks...
Eyes: black circles
Mark a Devils pact,
As they circle
The cracks exhale;
Gasping again...
But then to Inhale.

Dopeness stay up fams and keep writing.

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