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Old 08-17-05, 11:08 AM   #7
E.C
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iite.. imma break it down.

mad knight:

Never spit dope or legit,cuz every1 knows u’ll get beat just admit
Take a hint and retire cuz even yur title is tellin u something…D-Quitz-It*
^^ nice opener, worded pretty good and its a decent personalAint tryin 2 Get Charges after this cuz my raps like real life i can beat her in a fight.....
The closet she'll ever come to be famous is her pics being compared to shaun white**....
^^ hmm ok i suppose, set up wasn't good though
Just time after her seeing the verse,commit suicide, so sit patiently
Even this bitch can see she cant handle the MWs, said it pure blatantly…
^^ couldav been dope.. just needs to be worded better but its ok
Knocking bitches heads off but with you im just racking your brain…
Then I came out with this,so I but a bullet though ya head like Kurt Kobian …
^^not really feeling this.. sorry manMore emotions that an opera show,no u a drama,but cunt wants you on screen…..
Why you into text? Don’t you know all bitches can do good is cook and clean….
^^ its played but it made me laugh lol

overall: i felt your that your verse was ite. wack in some parts and good in others, you lack consistancy you start off decent then it goes downhill from there... what you should work on in youre next battle is your setup line it needs to be relevent to the punch so it can hit hard. structure and flow was ite but could still use some work.

DQ:

Got illusions from the grass but I ain't fucking with you like Ras Kass
Ain't that kinda lass, ya mind is as dark as Tha Q's dick up your ass
^^ get rid off those multies lol.. they aint owrking in this bar, but the punch was pretty funny
Why you looking so green? Jealous cuz in this battle, I’m the queen?
“Transsexuals Tonight” is the only time we’ll see you on a TV screen
^^ lol ok imma give you that one
Decided to quit text because ya secret is out: real name is Beverly!
Nothing left to hide behind, you tried but failed new tricks so cleverly
^^ best bar in your verse, it was worded decent and a decent play on his usertitle
Sex operation was a blunder…damn, that surgeon really sonned her
Never above, just always under: you finishing first is a small wonder
^^not really feeling this one sorry

overall: not a bad verse you had a couple decent punches in there. the rest were either weak or didn't make sense. flow and structure were real nice, wording of your punches was ok... get rod of those multies in your verse it doesn't really work. like i said to mk work on your set up lines so it fits the punch better. other than that its not a bad verse, well done.

ok pretty close battle but imma gtive it to mad knight. i felt he was more consistant and his punches hit harder.

v/ Mad knight
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