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Old 07-29-06, 12:59 PM   #4
Mentalz
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That was some horrible fucking feed you stupid cunt.

Give me a few to read it Atty.

Edit:

This was dope. your style hasnt changed much Atty, but to be honost I didnt really like your poetry vibe crossing over on your OM's as they tended to do some months back when I read shit here still. Your verse seemed more fluid from what it used to be, the structure was the same, but your choice and placement of words just showed elevation... and from just 3-4 months of writting. It's impressive to watch that. Anyways, this piece was dope. It took the four types of mainstream hip-hop and you guys just exploded on it. I tend to favor Jek's verse most, mainly due to his composition of multies and count, the vibe was there for sure. Brix you had nice emotion aswell, but it wasnt anything to make me hold my breath over. Overall I think the entire peice could have used more. More lines, more description. Just expanded as a whole.

Very nice though fams.
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