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Old 06-10-05, 04:22 PM   #9
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Voted For: FreeZe_In_HeLL

Haha Pretty Nice Battle Here...

(Stanza):

Punches weren't really hitting that hard man...Your verse lacked creativity and personals, and you were not very consistent.

Break Down:

Why Must I Continue To Battle These Wack Monkey Children
This Dude Mad Bcuz My Lyrics Tears him Down Like Buildings

No, played and weak!!! 4/10

Yo Crackheads Pass Your Dope Down Bcuz its not worth Smokin
This Is a Typed Text Battle Dude....So Why the Hell You Chokin?

No...3/10

Well I Thought You hade Some Skills But I Can See Through You
Bcuz You couldnt Add Up To My Skills With my Rymes Times Two

What?? No man come on now 2/10

Fucking Roachez Easily Everytime You Zoned Out, Come Back To Life
I Screwed N' Chopped Yo Wife Like Houston Music & Paul Wall At The Mic

LOL best yet...6/10

Eternity Is a Long time Dude So Pull Out Your Ruler And Lets Measure
His rymes Could be A Ho On The Job and He still couldnt Provide Pleasure

Played and weak...5/10

Overall: 20/50 (40%)

Freeze_In_Hell:

Haha pretty nice verse here from u man, Had some creative lines and funny punches and personals, but you do not need to explain every single little thing. But Overall, I was no doubt feeling your verse better.

Break Down:

Fuck a ‘stanza’…u don’t deserve one line in my sonnet
Claims hes ’pro’ but the only winners in ‘NC’ was a ’college’

LOL Good...7/10

Gain some knowledge, get your skill up, and quit bein a fan
I guess its hard to break the habit when u named yourself after ‘stan’(za)

Decent personal, kinda played, but decent...6/10

I know ‘cokeheads throwin up’ could ‘spit an iller line’ than u (get it!)*4
Only reason u fill the ‘seats’, cause none of rapverse can ‘stand’ u (damn)

LMAO NICE!! 9/10

I guess ima be the one to leave a ‘2’ in your ‘losses place’
Cause the only time ya rhymes is ‘tite’, is when u ‘runnin out a space’

LMAO!!!! Nice again...8/10

So just put up the pen, and lay ya notebook on the shelf
Cause the only time ppl liked ya ‘spits’ is when u ‘drowned’ yourself *5

OK...6/10

Overall: 36/50 (72%)

V/ Freeze_In_Hell
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