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Old 03-30-06, 11:25 AM   #4
J Summers
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theese sleepy ass r.v. bastards.. i'll peep dis shit hol on..

wow dont have your speakers up at the beginin its mad distorted... the lil bundy clip that is...

not bad... quality is good on this... i dont like when it switches from like actually rapping to soundin like a phone... not very good flow on that part.. good lyricism but notta good flow... beat is ok...ok i like the hook its pretty good but verses could have been better i dont like that effect on your vocals... good lyrics on second verse... flow is a lil better on this verse...third verse same as second good lyrics ok flow good vocab.. not my style a track decent listen stay up-1

7/10
rtf http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=224972
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