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Old 05-29-05, 07:19 AM   #14
E.C
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sPuL:

Lookin' at your pic, I see you suffer from the munchies
Cuz you got enough fat in your cheeks, to feed 7 thirdworld countries
^^ lol nice opener decent punch 7/10
Facin' an "alien" like you? Nope, not what I demanded
Shit, look at the light behind you, man, your mothership jus landed!!
^^ ROFL this was dope 8/10
Damn, kid, you're a mistake, wit skater shirt. Dude, you're wack to me
Your birth certificate?...................................... ........
.................................................. .. A sorry letter from condom factories
^^ another killer bar 8/10
You could race against turtles and slugs, but couldn't beat 'em
Man, you couldn't come in first, if you replaced Adam in Eden
^^ good wordplay decent punche here 7/10
And you kno Canadian's gay, and always doggy style fuck
Y'all only do it that way, so y'all can BOTH watch the puck
^^ lol nice play in the canadians 8/10
Kid, sittin' wit all that "hair"..... he looks like a "Survivor" nut
If this shit was the show, Drake's not the only thing that should be cut
^^ ok i aint really feelin it though 6/10

*beat stops*

Wet Willy shoves his dick up Drake's behind, cuz that shit makes him cushy
Then he shoves it down Drakel's mouth, cuz it's the closest he gets to pussy
^^ lol kinda played but its ok i guess 6/10

50/70

you had a good solid verse some dope personals and some funny punches in there... nice drop


Drakel:

officially back now, RV's better off, so this bitch should know
the only time you'll have a hit single, is inpersonating ichiro
^^ lol nice opener dope punch 8/10
while RV has had its fill of whack lately, spul is over-eating
you got re-named 'rec-less' after you were banned for cheating
^^ nice nameplay dope punch 8/10
look into comedy man, you got some talent there, thats a fact
you could really make it big, just make your text is the act
^^ ok i spose couldav been worded better 7/10
ya hit bottom, so after a year you think the only place to go is higher
shit, you're known by two names but yet i still havn't heard of either
^^ not as good as the other 3 bars 6/10
aint mushroom for losers, especially when its you whos molding a career
cause only time you pounding anybody, is when youre holding their beers
^^ i dont get it 5/10
spul aint nobody to fear, just a wannabe tryna hold a mic
i pitch my verse to him, blows by like its his third strike
^^ not bad but not good either 6/10
aint no competition, spul needs a boost to come out with the greater grade
so he goes sucks off some crocs, cause he saw a commercial for gator-ade
^^ lol decent closure 7/10

47/70

you had a decent verse but i felt that you didn't have as harder punches as sPuL did... you should stay consistant through the verse then the outcome wouldav been different...


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