two comments. 1 - I didn't know what "flout" meant. "To a realm of desire and of deceit, and to where my friend only flouts of me more" So I had to hit dictionary.com. lol - good word usage and vocab depth. 2 - Is your "friend" a metaphor for a hidden personality within yourself? Either way - exceptional poem, although I think cutting yourself is a weird way to find ones self. I think there are a hundred more ways to define your being, and express yourself to yourself. But thats me. Either way - good drop.

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