im not going to lie,
at the beginning i had no idea where u were going with it.

but mid-way through i was startin to see whats up..beginning..a bit of a mystery i think you didnt get out wut u were trying to say fully....unless im just stupid..but it seems u did not get ur point across
overall i say thats my only complaint after that you really captivated my mind and this wasnt that bad of a piece good job

rtf if i decide to write ne thing

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