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Old 02-05-05, 07:26 PM   #12
TeamOne
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sorry dizzle........ u straight up lost.......... the first beat was so empty, and seemed to missing so much to make it better.... it was laid back, but thats juss cuz u had nothin to it... i think ive made a better beat than that..... ur second beat was pretty good, except that the transition between the hook and where the hook goes is so bad and they conflict with each other alot... it just doesnt fit

Avalon, ur first beat was dope.... i know that Avalon off beat thing was so ur beat wouldnt get stolen so i didnt pay any attention to that.... i liked the sampl and the outro was nice.... i like how u kinda connect the two beats, and the next one had pretty nice strings, and well done samples..... the first beat i think one u the battle, it was kinda hype, while both of dizzles were so laid back and soft as hell soundin (matter fact ur whole page is like soft music, not to hate)......

V/Avalon (but i agree with CALI, it does sound like "Av is wack" the first couple of times.)
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