exposed, cause stanza couldn't come sick if he had a fever
stanza could 'shit out an award' but still wouldn't be an 'achiever'
^^1st line hella played, 2nd line not feelin it
when i'm done, the pan'll be attach to you sort of like peter
the edge will leave stanza cut up, cause i come with e meat cleaver
^^ok
slow progress cause his process of making it come's like a snail
any slower you can move back, cause his delivery slower then mail
^^ok, not too witty
IM'ed me and said "please vote for me against nostradamus"
i promised i votes so i voted nos, well at least he lost honest
^^horrible wording
if stanza wanted to conceal his identity, he couldn't be able to
i'm like a life machine i bring him a flat line like it's fatal dude
^^no diss
stan's to much of a self glory person, you don't need medication*
you could board a plain an write your verse still would succeed in elevation
^^played concept, ok flip of it
vs.
He "Runnin Assfault" In Jail So He Get "Passed Around" Like "Track Battonz"
How Can You "Beat Me" When You Workin With "Pussie'z" Like "Yvonne?"
^^okish
You Shit Doesnt Carry "No Weight" Like You is Writting With "Light Text"
But Your Lines Still Dont "Shine" Even If You Was Rockin "Oiled "Spandex"
^^nah
Two Wins? Ha Thats Not a Winning Streak Thats A Shit Stain In Rv's Draws
So Ill Clorox Your Nutz So We Wont See The Division In Your Balls (lol)
^^don't write (lol) at your own punch, that's gay. not liking this
6 Lines Done Now You Got The "Shit That Runs" So Ill Call You "Lil Squirtz"
I Know You a "Pussy" Bcuz I seen Your "Stuff" When You Wore That "Skirt"
^^ok
"Changing The Wheels On My Car" Is The Only Time Youll See me "Re-Tire"
Then Ill Put You In A "Skillet At a Camp Fire" So That You can Be "On-Fire"
^^1st line is very played wordplay, 2nd line is ok
You Week So Ill Let The Punctual Actions of my Keyboard Finish Him Like
!@!#!@!@@!#!@#!@#!@#!@@#!@##!@#!@#!!!!!! You Dyke
^^haha, arrogant
still/vStanza, although not enough posts yet, so just feedback. Leave an honest vote on this battle:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=205714
thanks