Veeeeeery Nice Piece Of Writing...
Your Vocabulary Is Imaculant, So Much Brilliance Withing This Pieces Raw Emotion...
Uuum, Nothing I Can Complain About Really...
Topic And Concept Were On Point...
You Even Had A Rhym Scheme And Managed To Sustain It's Consistancy Throughout The Piece...
None Of The Rhyms Seamed Forced, Just Real Natural And Flowing...
On A Number Scale I Would Rate It 9.8/10 (Lol Cuz Ima Dick Like That And Dont Give 10's)...
You're Such A Consistant Writer Just Overall...
I Havent Responded To All Your Work But I've Read A Few Pieces And Your Pretty Flawless In Just Every Aspect Of Your Poetry...
Stay Up Fem, I'll Be Looking For More...

And I'd Apreciate It If You Would Return The Favor And Just Check Out My Drop...
Its Right Here In The Poetry Forums Called "Push"...
Thanks Alot Fem, And Again...
Very Nice Drop Right Hear...
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